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Title: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: sportyaccordy on November 15, 2012, 09:31:25 AM
Working on a car and a bike. Here's where I am with the bike.

(http://i.imgur.com/p7KU4.png)
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: 2o6 on November 15, 2012, 09:34:47 AM
Good. I'd throw a subsurf modifier on there to make it look a little stronger, but that's just my style. No wrong or right way here.
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: MrH on November 15, 2012, 09:46:36 AM
Looks pretty good.  I like the styling.  I'm not seeing a frame in there though :lol:
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: sportyaccordy on November 15, 2012, 11:35:51 AM
No frame. Panigale style. Just basically bolt the headstock to the cylinder head. Save a good 10-20lbs. Make it CF, save another 10 or so lbs. Big weight on a ~400lb creature :lol: Just need to come up with whatever the situation is gonna be at the back end. Definitely gonna do some kind of parallelogram setup; just trying to figure out the prettiest way to mount the shock

The materials and edges are tricky. 2o6 is there anyway to give the materials a little more depth w/o extruding? Subsurf works great as does smooth rendering but I am looking to really nail the texture of the paint. Give it that nice gleaming almost wet paint look. Here's a model someone else did with awesome awesome texture/paint

(http://behance.vo.llnwd.net/profiles21/566407/projects/4026915/2e36338f3114ad31207b0980954ee8b8.jpg)

See how his windshield has a little lip to it? That is the kind of depth I want to apply to the windscreen + fairing on mine.
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: 2o6 on November 15, 2012, 11:41:23 AM
I'm not all that strong on rendering; usually I export my stuff to Racer.

I'm not much help there, sorry.
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: SVT666 on November 15, 2012, 12:00:31 PM
Looks good,  but the wheelbase looks about 6" too long.
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: Raza on November 15, 2012, 12:44:41 PM
It looks good, but I think it would be better if it had four seats and a roof.
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: sportyaccordy on November 15, 2012, 12:48:45 PM
Short tails are all the rage these days.

(http://images.motorcycle-usa.com/PhotoGallerys/xlarge/Ducati-1199-Panigale-S.gif)

[imghttp://www.hondaproracing.com/images/machine/medium/castrol_cbr1000rr_1.jpg[/img]http://(http://attach.kawiforums.com/2007/04/02/20070402150808-0-7743.jpg)

Plus there's a lot still missing from the back end (suspension, brakes)
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: sportyaccordy on November 15, 2012, 12:50:50 PM
Quote from: Raza  on November 15, 2012, 12:44:41 PM
It looks good, but I think it would be better if it had four seats and a roof.
The car is coming. I will post where I am with that tonight.
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: Raza on November 15, 2012, 12:56:38 PM
Quote from: sportyaccordy on November 15, 2012, 12:50:50 PM
The car is coming. I will post where I am with that tonight.

The car would look better if it were a 1+2 three seater with 7 doors, and power soft and hard top, AWD, two more seats, and weighed under 2200 pounds. 
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: sportyaccordy on November 15, 2012, 01:14:55 PM
:lol:

To be fair the car is a culmination of my "wants". Pretty much what the Panamera should have been. 5 door hatchback, screaming W8 (2 close I4s), RWD, ~3500lbs
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: sportyaccordy on November 17, 2012, 02:28:26 PM
My save keeps fcking crashing. Here is as far as I've been able to get on the first pass. I love the jump in realism the new paint and material thickness gave the front fairing. Still not crazy about the seat though.

(http://i.imgur.com/L4btl.png)

I want to start over again anyway from a different angle... build all the materials and take my time to make each piece meticulous.
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: Atomic on November 17, 2012, 02:38:20 PM
Starting over? I like what you did but sounds like you are having lots of fun. That's the point, eh? That and the final product. Sweet work, Sporty!

:ohyeah:
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: sportyaccordy on November 20, 2012, 08:08:57 PM
First two passes made me lol. Only problem is now I'm running a new more flexible engine and I'm running low on computing power

Anyways here's a quick rendering of effort #2

(http://i.imgur.com/iMbwr.png)

Added a windscreen

(http://i.imgur.com/nPzqN.png)

:wub:
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: SVT666 on November 20, 2012, 08:13:06 PM
Looks pretty sweet.
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: Raza on November 21, 2012, 09:33:42 AM
Looks pretty good.  What's the sidecar going to look like?
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: SVT666 on November 21, 2012, 09:44:28 AM
The problem with bikes is that there is only so much you can do with that shape.  Every bike built in the last 10 years looks the same and you can't really differentiate them.
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: sportyaccordy on November 21, 2012, 10:31:02 AM
Quote from: SVT666 on November 21, 2012, 09:44:28 AM
The problem with bikes is that there is only so much you can do with that shape.  Every bike built in the last 10 years looks the same and you can't really differentiate them.
One could say the same about cars. Its all about the details. The cool thing about bikes though is all the details are in the open. A car model is just the shell, windows, lights, wheels, brakes, tires and exhaust. Bikes have all that, as well as the suspension, controls etc. Next time you see a sportbike just try and take in all the details. Its like a race car w/no sheetmetal.

Plus while its true bikes are kind of limited in design by function, to a degree so are sports cars. Just like there's a clear diff from cars from different decades, there's differences in bikes. Its been like learning about cars all over again
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: SVT666 on November 21, 2012, 11:09:14 AM
Quote from: sportyaccordy on November 21, 2012, 10:31:02 AM
One could say the same about cars. Its all about the details. The cool thing about bikes though is all the details are in the open. A car model is just the shell, windows, lights, wheels, brakes, tires and exhaust. Bikes have all that, as well as the suspension, controls etc. Next time you see a sportbike just try and take in all the details. Its like a race car w/no sheetmetal.

Plus while its true bikes are kind of limited in design by function, to a degree so are sports cars. Just like there's a clear diff from cars from different decades, there's differences in bikes. Its been like learning about cars all over again
Yes and no.  Even casual observers can see a big difference between cars from today and 10 years ago, but not so with bikes.  I like bikes and I have a hard time.  There is so little material on a bike that there isn't much that can be done to differentiate them.  Cars are a lot easier.  Not saying it's bad, I'm saying it's true.

2003 Kawasaki Ninja ZX-6R
(http://www.motorsports-network.com/kawasaki/mc2003/ZX6red12.jpg)


2012 Kawasaki Ninja ZX-6R
(http://img.solidautonet.com/5828/7661568/1.jpg)
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: sportyaccordy on November 21, 2012, 11:28:41 AM
Thats kind of an unfair comparo, as the 03 636 was a huge move forward. I can't think of an an automotive analog as sportbike evolution has been pretty nutty over the last 20 years.

But compare that to the 2002 ZX6R, theres a few somewhat obvious differences to me.

(http://www.totalmotorcycle.com/photos/2002models/2002-Kawasaki-ZX-6Re.jpg)

02 is way more upright and has much less mass centralization. Look how big the tail is. Look how much higher the handlebars are. Look at the forks. I mean it is kind of subtle, but when you see the two bikes next to each other it becomes obvious.

Also the big diffs between Japanese + European bikes. The old adages about character ring even louder. A mid 90s Japanese sportbike looks wild but is kind of blah. A mid 90s Ducati looks downright exotic, even now. I mean look at the iconic 916

(http://www.ducati.ms/forums/attachments/superbikes/52887d1249960656-ducati-999-everything-since-ducati_916.jpg)

Vs some of the Japanese bikes from the same era

(http://medias.forum-auto.com/uploads/200310/eben29_1066774651_zx9r01.jpg)

(http://www.autopictu.com/images/yamaha-yzf-1000-r-thunderace-09.jpg)

(http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/c/c3/Honda_CBR900RR_Fireblade_1992,jpg.jpg)

They look bulbous + visually heavier or just plain old

I mean my wife can't tell the diff between an E30 M3 and an old Accord... but you and me know the designs + cars are as different as night and day
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: hotrodalex on November 21, 2012, 01:42:26 PM
Junk.
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: sportyaccordy on November 22, 2012, 07:43:35 AM
Quote from: hotrodalex on November 21, 2012, 01:42:26 PM
Junk.
?
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: Cookie Monster on November 22, 2012, 10:24:08 AM
Why are the exhausts on new sportbikes so hideous?



Nice work so far, sporty. :ohyeah:
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: sportyaccordy on November 22, 2012, 06:56:50 PM
Quote from: thecarnut on November 22, 2012, 10:24:08 AM
Why are the exhausts on new sportbikes so hideous?



Nice work so far, sporty. :ohyeah:
Mass centralization.

Pretty much finished.

(http://i.imgur.com/aHCsl.png)

(http://i.imgur.com/x1Udr.png)

(http://i.imgur.com/lbjrb.png)
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: 2o6 on November 22, 2012, 07:00:18 PM
How'd you get that noise on your renderings? What are your settings?
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: sportyaccordy on November 22, 2012, 07:21:12 PM
I'm using the Cycles engine. You have to compromise between time and noise. That first rendering had about 40 samples; last two were like 150.

I like Cycles much better. The surface engine renders so much more cleanly and is easier to set up. I'm also picking up a lot of other stuff though. That first rendering makes me laugh whenever I see it lol.
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: hotrodalex on November 22, 2012, 10:22:11 PM
Quote from: thecarnut on November 22, 2012, 10:24:08 AM
Why are the exhausts on new sportbikes so hideous?

Buell's exhausts are the best, IMO.

(http://technomotortrend.files.wordpress.com/2010/05/2006-buell-fireboltxb12rb-small.jpg)
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: 2o6 on November 23, 2012, 10:15:54 AM
Quote from: sportyaccordy on November 22, 2012, 07:21:12 PM
I'm using the Cycles engine. You have to compromise between time and noise. That first rendering had about 40 samples; last two were like 150.

I like Cycles much better. The surface engine renders so much more cleanly and is easier to set up. I'm also picking up a lot of other stuff though. That first rendering makes me laugh whenever I see it lol.

Golly, i started playing with cycles, it looks way better then Blender render.



Hows your car coming along?
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: 2o6 on November 23, 2012, 10:33:37 AM
Quote from: sportyaccordy on November 22, 2012, 07:21:12 PM
I'm using the Cycles engine. You have to compromise between time and noise. That first rendering had about 40 samples; last two were like 150.

I like Cycles much better. The surface engine renders so much more cleanly and is easier to set up. I'm also picking up a lot of other stuff though. That first rendering makes me laugh whenever I see it lol.

Golly, i started playing with cycles, it looks way better then Blender render.



Hows your car coming along?
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: sportyaccordy on November 25, 2012, 04:22:36 PM
Quote from: 2o6 on November 23, 2012, 10:33:37 AM
Golly, i started playing with cycles, it looks way better then Blender render.



Hows your car coming along?
I have to start from scratch on the car. For some reason I just can't get the topology right. Subsurf makes things like doors stop lining up. I might need to start from scratch again, with sketches
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: Cookie Monster on November 25, 2012, 04:28:55 PM
Sporty, that looks fucking awesome. :ohyeah:
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: sportyaccordy on November 25, 2012, 05:07:04 PM
Quote from: thecarnut on November 25, 2012, 04:28:55 PM
Sporty, that looks fucking awesome. :ohyeah:
Thanks :ohyeah:
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: 2o6 on November 25, 2012, 05:11:16 PM
Quote from: sportyaccordy on November 25, 2012, 04:22:36 PM
I have to start from scratch on the car. For some reason I just can't get the topology right. Subsurf makes things like doors stop lining up. I might need to start from scratch again, with sketches

You can cheat this by using edges to keep things from subdividing and warping in certain places.
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: ergodic on November 27, 2012, 02:07:00 PM
Quote from: sportyaccordy on November 21, 2012, 11:28:41 AM
Thats kind of an unfair comparo, as the 03 636 was a huge move forward. I can't think of an an automotive analog as sportbike evolution has been pretty nutty over the last 20 years.

But compare that to the 2002 ZX6R, theres a few somewhat obvious differences to me.

(http://www.totalmotorcycle.com/photos/2002models/2002-Kawasaki-ZX-6Re.jpg)

02 is way more upright and has much less mass centralization. Look how big the tail is. Look how much higher the handlebars are. Look at the forks. I mean it is kind of subtle, but when you see the two bikes next to each other it becomes obvious.

Also the big diffs between Japanese + European bikes. The old adages about character ring even louder. A mid 90s Japanese sportbike looks wild but is kind of blah. A mid 90s Ducati looks downright exotic, even now. I mean look at the iconic 916

(http://www.ducati.ms/forums/attachments/superbikes/52887d1249960656-ducati-999-everything-since-ducati_916.jpg)

Vs some of the Japanese bikes from the same era

(http://medias.forum-auto.com/uploads/200310/eben29_1066774651_zx9r01.jpg)

(http://www.autopictu.com/images/yamaha-yzf-1000-r-thunderace-09.jpg)

(http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/c/c3/Honda_CBR900RR_Fireblade_1992,jpg.jpg)

They look bulbous + visually heavier or just plain old

I mean my wife can't tell the diff between an E30 M3 and an old Accord... but you and me know the designs + cars are as different as night and day

:rage: The Fireblade is bulbouse and just plain old?! You take that back!!!

:lol:
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: 2o6 on December 02, 2012, 03:12:15 PM
Quote from: sportyaccordy on November 26, 2012, 03:01:05 PM
Looks way better. Can you post some pics of your wireframes... I just can't get this shit right man.


Mine aren't the best, but I use the "edge" tool (highlight and edge and hit Shift+E) to keep the subsurf modifier from rounding out edges too much. Not going to lie, traditional modeling I'm not very strong at all with, but I know enough to get the job done.


Since most of my cars have an interior fleshed out, here's a model with a decent wireframe.


No subsurf modifier

(http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i87/Vannette_12/subsurfoff.jpg)


With subsurf modifier

(http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i87/Vannette_12/subsurfon.jpg)


Careful placement of lines of polygons + edges tool lets me get the subsurf modifier to do what I want it to.
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: sportyaccordy on December 05, 2012, 08:00:54 AM
I will give that a try man. I like subsurf but it really fucks up edges like doors and shit. What does the edge tool do basically? Just keep subsurf from fucking with it?
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: 2o6 on December 05, 2012, 04:56:20 PM
Quote from: sportyaccordy on December 05, 2012, 08:00:54 AM
What does the edge tool do basically? Just keep subsurf from fucking with it?

Yes. You can also chamfer edges and do some other subdivisions to create a more realistic "edge". Only real downside is sometimes it has too many polygons for the purpose, but mine are generally low-poly so I don't think it matters.  I try to keep the model as one unit as long as possible before I start separating doors and other pieces (because it does screw with polygonal lines). Some stuff I don't find necessary to explicitly connect to the mesh; often times my dashboards and other interior pieces clip and aren't united to the main body model.



The edge tool lets me get things to 9/10 times line up, but some areas do need tweaking.


(http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i87/Vannette_12/checkedges.jpg)
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: sportyaccordy on December 10, 2012, 06:33:26 AM
Still needs work but its looking better. I am learning its better to model each body piece individually. Also got a good handle on the subsurf/edge stuff. My window game is still pretty shitty though. And the topography needs work. Shits kinda not lining up.

(http://i.imgur.com/XqFtn.png)

Thinking about expanding the hatch/trunk a little bit but I still really wanna keep this thing nice and trim. You know me. Should get interesting when I start making the chassis/powertrain but that is easy compared to getting all these damn body parts to play nice.
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: 2o6 on December 10, 2012, 09:27:06 AM
That looks great!
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: CJ on December 10, 2012, 09:44:18 AM
Lengthen the wheelbase and make the trunk a little longer. I think it'd really look great. Very SLS like, kinda.
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: SVT666 on December 10, 2012, 12:01:22 PM
SLS?  Looks like a stretched RX-8.
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: sportyaccordy on December 15, 2012, 09:53:23 AM
There's still more to do!!!!

(http://i.imgur.com/w58jU.png)

For the exterior I still need to clean up some edges... maybe turn up the subsurf again to get the last bit of blockiness out, and def finalize the daylight openings. Also gotta do lights, exhaust and shit like doorhandles and all that.

Then from there we work our way in... gonna make the undercarriage, engine, suspension and closeout with the interior hopefully. Gonna take some time but I am making steady progress
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: sportyaccordy on December 15, 2012, 05:56:24 PM
Cleaned up a little bit. Did the roof over, cleaned up the wheel arches and side window, lined up the bumper and lower edges

(http://i.imgur.com/6w4yP.png)
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: 2o6 on December 15, 2012, 06:10:38 PM
Looks alright, would love to see another angle.
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: Cookie Monster on December 15, 2012, 06:14:30 PM
The rear deck area looks too short.
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: Laconian on December 15, 2012, 06:16:08 PM
RX8!
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: sportyaccordy on December 15, 2012, 07:14:31 PM
(http://i.imgur.com/JY8EI.png)

(http://i.imgur.com/UKICa.png)

I see a couple of things

I see 1st gen Viper in the general silhouette/profile... the cutout of the doors, the bulge of the nose, the greenhouse, even the window shape and maybe the wheels too. Maybe I will make roof bubbles

I see a little 1st gen Neon in the nose, but I am still on the fence with what to do there. Gonna have LED headlights for sure, and some funky ducts etc. Def gonna be pretty aggressive. Gonna do some sketches to brainstorm

Overall though I like it... not bad for a first effort I think. Thinking of what to do next, and how to finish the bike. Bike has some details I'm not crazy about. Might do the engine over completely with more detail + texture.

*EDIT* Yeech def gotta do the rear window over too. Hot mess. No biggie
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: Laconian on December 16, 2012, 12:10:29 AM
Can you give the roof a double bubble?
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: Raza on December 18, 2012, 11:02:48 AM
Yeah, that spoiler has to go. 
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: sportyaccordy on December 18, 2012, 03:53:22 PM
But then I will have to make the decklid more pronounced. The net effect will be the same, I think
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: Raza on December 19, 2012, 08:04:40 AM
Quote from: sportyaccordy on December 18, 2012, 03:53:22 PM
But then I will have to make the decklid more pronounced. The net effect will be the same, I think

It looked better without it. 

It looks a lot like an RX-8, that can't be denied.  And just like an RX-8, the short decklid makes spoilers look goofy.  It's better without.  I even removed the stock spoiler on my RX-8 in Horizon because it looks so terrible.
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: sportyaccordy on December 19, 2012, 01:40:26 PM
I suppose it would look cleaner. I will take it off the body and make it an option.
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: Laconian on December 19, 2012, 01:59:44 PM
Make it part of the Sport Convenience Package!
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: Raza on December 20, 2012, 12:37:26 PM
Quote from: Laconian on December 19, 2012, 01:59:44 PM
Make it part of the Sport Convenience Package!

Sportvenience Pack!  Spoiler and heated/cooled cupholders!
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: Laconian on December 20, 2012, 01:17:52 PM
Engine bay cameras! Bluetooth enabled sport exhaust!
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: Eye of the Tiger on December 20, 2012, 01:19:41 PM
Quote from: Raza  on December 20, 2012, 12:37:26 PM
Sportvenience Pack!  Spoiler and heated/cooled cupholders!

The spoiler should also be heated and cooled; it can melt ice, and form ice.
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: Eye of the Tiger on December 20, 2012, 01:23:37 PM
Quote from: Laconian on December 20, 2012, 01:17:52 PM
Engine bay cameras! Bluetooth enabled sport exhaust!

That should require stereo headphones. Some people only have a single ear piece.
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: Laconian on December 20, 2012, 02:16:15 PM
Genius. It creates down force on demand by accumulating ice.
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: sportyaccordy on December 20, 2012, 03:47:50 PM
You guys jest but how cool would it be to say "afterburners... activate" and have the sport exhaust open up

I'm keeping and trademarking that
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: Laconian on December 20, 2012, 04:18:48 PM
Afterburners, activate!
"Uh oh, something's wrong. Can you try again?"
Afterburners, activate!
"Sorry, I'm having trouble connecting to the network."
Afterburners, activate!
"OK, got it. Here is a map to Afterburners."
Title: Re: W/o remorse I put these renderings out there
Post by: sportyaccordy on December 20, 2012, 05:07:33 PM
Quote from: Laconian on December 20, 2012, 04:18:48 PM
Afterburners, activate!
"Uh oh, something's wrong. Can you try again?"
Afterburners, activate!
"Sorry, I'm having trouble connecting to the network."
Afterburners, activate!
"OK, got it. Here is a map to Afterburners."
"Afterburners- Restaurant- Category: Gastrointestinal Destruction"